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Free me

So here’s a poem I made a month or two ago and, I thought I’d do something different. I wanted to make a dark one… And obviously these poems do not reflect who I am but maybe you can say a portrait or a snapshot of how I felt at a certain period of time.

Well here it is.

 Free me

Sickly enmeshed in gunk,

staring blind into the dead grey sky.

Slowly chewed within

by little creatures unseen;

cackling away,

only teeth marks portray.

 

 

Failing limbs pulled in

the miry clay.

Where is your escape?

Oh frail mind? Where?

 

Sinking, sinking…

Where art thou sun?

Where? Your rays that bring the day?

That so warmeth the clouds

red soft soothing rays…

 

The abounding ground

this pit it surrounds,

are pitifully marked with attempts.

They decorate this jail

with such mockery and jest.

 

Only an echo of what is

remains, but distant…

Only heard by compassionate discerning minds.

 

Free me…

All hands on deck

I was thinking of which of my poems should go first and I thought why not I put this one? Reason for it is that I think it’s a pretty decent poem and I hope to make a good first impression :p…

I made this one back in February 17, 2010 and first posted it in Facebook at 3:58am.. lol… My inspirations seem to come in the wee hours of the night..

Well, here it is! Enjoy!

 

All Hands on Deck

Drifting away from the eye within

into the tempest surround.

With one wayward steer

from a result of want.

 

Into a buffet of whimsical compulsions

of tempting wind and waves,

Scrambling weary men of within;

All hands on deck,

the skipper to the stern!

 

This man is drenched.

Almost begging for light,

for angry clouds to dissipate,

The struggle for maturity;

The ways of abundant life.

 

No longer a boy’s fantasy

but the crosses of a man.

The only way to get better

is for one to go through it.

 

This ship may be under siege,

but it shall not lay waste nor sink.

Not on my watch…

Nor the watch of the eyes of the above.

 

 

Until then! Wait for the next one :)

First post and intro

Well, I’ve decided to compile all the poems that I’ve made over the years here. Thanks to Celine for the idea!

I started writing poems back in middle school probably in year 6 after seeing a friend of mine write poems and I decided why not, and I gave it a shot.

My very first poem that I made was for my first girlfriend back then lol.. Imagine that.. year six… I wish I could just look at what I wrote back then and probably have a hearty laugh at myself!

I’m seem to have a thing for playing with words, making them rhyme and somewhat have a rhythm to them…

Well, I hope you enjoy them as much as I have enjoyed making them.

God bless :)